In George Saunders speech Importance of Kindness, he tells a story about a girl that used to
get teased all the time for being so shy an awkward, and for chewing on her
hair a lot. He takes this story into a further movement and into this greater
idea about kindness. Saunders first starts off telling the story about her and
then saying, “Now why do I regret that? Why forty two years later am I still
thinking about it? Relative to most kids I was actually pretty nice to her.”
After questioning himself about feeling guilty towards the girl that got
teased, Saunders takes that regret into a further idea and explains “What I
regret most in my life are failures of kindness. Those moments when another
human being was there in front of me, and I responded sensibly, reservedly,
mildly.” He says that the reason he regrets not
doing anything about the girl who was teased was because he could’ve been kind
to her, but chose not to say anything at all, and he still thinks about it to
this day. Saunders is trying to get across that the things you’re going to end
up regretting are times when you could’ve been nice, but chose not to do
anything.
Saunders also goes on and explains how the girl who was
teased felt, by using imagery and describing the way she looked “I still remember
the way she looked after such an insult. Eyes caste down, a little gut kicked
as if having just being reminded of her place in things she was trying, as much
as possible to disappear.” He explains how depressed the girl was since no one
was nice to her by describing how she looked after an insult, and how you could
see her hurt. This shows that Saunders did notice that she was hurt, and could
tell that people were being mean to her that it really did affect her, but he
regrets not doing anything to change her, and make her happier, since he did
nothing but be a bystander and let her hurt.
The example of imagery that Saunders uses also shows how
he notices things others may not. When he described her as having “eyes caste down,
a little gut kicked…” other people probably didn’t notice the way she reacted
afterwards, because they kept teasing her, or they didn’t care if it hurt her.
Saunders noticed that it hurt her and felt sorry for her, and wishes that he
did something to make her feel better. Others might not be as sympathetic as he
was, and didn’t notice how hurt those words really made her feel.
I'm not sure if I can tell exactly which three aspects of the writing voice you are using in the blog, but i can specifically tell that you brought out imagery and how he employs techniques of narrative, but i don't think i can fully tell what your third aspect is. I would suggest having more prominent and clear sections of three clearly explain the three aspects of writing voice you decided to bring out and explain from the piece you read. One question i have for you real quick, what was exactly, the third aspect you decided to bring out?
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